Chapter Seven~ Renewal ~ Page 8

posted September 23rd, 2012, 3:00 pm


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September 23rd, 2012, 9:30 pm

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Dangit, don't stop here!! I need to know what happens next with these 2!

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September 23rd, 2012, 9:37 pm

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@bluswordgrl: Well, I have to tease you a little bit, don't I? :D There'll be an update next Sunday! ^_^

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September 24th, 2012, 12:04 am

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T.T Oooh, how I wish that the next button hadn't gone away! Why must these two be so lovable? I want to take them home, feed them food, and then... Well, I don't know, I guess make them a futon on the floor and let them sleep! (If I ever kidnapped someone, I might have problems getting them to leave after I collect the ransom...)
But my gosh, they are so cute! And I love all of the depth you give to their relationship. Setoo's insecurities make him very believable, and adding the demon part makes me that much more interested!
That reminds me, I've had a question for a while... Did you style his hair to look like ears on purpose? If so, you are a very, very clever person. If not... Well, happy accidents. But I'm guessing you did it on purpose.

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September 24th, 2012, 12:52 pm

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@KuroRiya: XD You always make me laugh! I feel much the same way about them - want to take them home, and... put them on the shelf, I guess, with my dolls? Good thing I actually have them as dolls. :)
Your comments mean a lot! I hope you will enjoy how Setoo develops over the course of the story.
:) Yes, I did style his hair on purpose to look a bit like ears. Even with the magical camouflage, my Demons can't fully hide some of their inhuman characteristics. His hair is a bit of a hint at his animal-style appearance that he can't hide, but at least he can pass it off as a hair style. And if he ever opened his mouth enough, you would see that his canines are quite pointy (so are the other teenage demons'). So yes - oftentimes, unusual hair is a bit of a giveaway.
Hmmm... maybe I possibly said too much there? If someone wants to dig deep and make some guesses, you might catch on to a secret hidden somewhere... ^___~

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September 24th, 2012, 10:10 pm

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ugdfibadkjghadpoiusgabg! Don't stop! I want to see Darryn's reaction and where he's going to tell him that he loves him! kjsaKADHBFKJB GFKJHRFKQUJBNFK!

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