Chapter Six~ Fever ~ Page 44

posted August 23rd, 2012, 8:00 am


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August 23rd, 2012, 8:12 am

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;u; Oh my goodness I missed this comic. I missed it so much. Thus story and art is just so lovely.
I noticed one thing though, the sleeves seem to cling exactly to the skin. Unless they're wearing spandex shirts, I think the sleeves would flow a bit more, and wouldn't show the exact shape of the arm.

Critiques aside, thank you so much for the update!

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August 23rd, 2012, 10:34 am

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lol, his friend is adorable! It's those freckles...so irresistible!

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August 23rd, 2012, 10:46 am

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@redleaveshavefallen: That's not entirely true, I've seen guys wear shirts skin tight that are not made of spandex. At least compared to dress shirts or certain sportswear to where it doesn't stick completely to the skin.

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August 23rd, 2012, 10:54 am

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@redleaveshavefallen & @Morana2020: You're both right...? Haha. Clothing and fabric folds is definitely something I need to get better/be more diligent at, and I will. :)

That said, my boys do tend to wear ringer t-shirts (because I like them, and it's my story :p), which generally are pretty form-fitting and have tight sleeves with borders. Though even those should have more folds. u_u I'll work on it!

That 3/4 sleeve turtleneck that Li is wearing in these pages however is actually supposed to be an Underarmour shirt, so it's damn close to Spandex! XD

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August 23rd, 2012, 12:22 pm

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I missed this comic sooo much. His friend is just so adorable. I want to hug them all *glomp*

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August 26th, 2012, 11:26 pm

IntoxicatedBloomer

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Aw! It's like brotherly love! hehe, being worried about someone like that does suck though >.< Awesome job duuuuuuuuuude :) Can't wait to read more! Oh! and I love that you kept the entire thing sort of on a grey and white scale kind of thing. IT looks like you just sketched everything out and just left it like that and I love it like that. :) Keep up the awesome work duuuuuuuuuude, hehe

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October 1st, 2012, 9:07 pm

kyocatlover

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out of the hole thing the only thing i noticed was the ballon and that kyo ( fav. name ever!) was stradiling him....my mind it so messed up...X/_\X

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